tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1550459552528920427.post181771585871384759..comments2011-01-03T10:15:46.671+00:00Comments on The Self-Publishing Review: Until The Deep Water Stills: An Internet-Enhanced Novel, by Michael Robert DyetJane Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03411253302725735470noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1550459552528920427.post-13875670132542760672010-02-13T17:47:47.759+00:002010-02-13T17:47:47.759+00:00Merrilee, I had such hopes for this book. I'm ...Merrilee, I had such hopes for this book. I'm prone to overwriting too, so I have every sympathy with its author: but he really must learn to edit his work more ruthlessly if he wants to succeed. This book was really not up to scratch, and was a big disappointment for me.Jane Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03411253302725735470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1550459552528920427.post-73843513040442265432009-12-03T11:39:45.483+00:002009-12-03T11:39:45.483+00:00The blurb was enough to put me off, and the excerp...The blurb was enough to put me off, and the excerpt just clinched it. <br /><br />A BA in creative writing does not make a writer.Merrileehttp://notenoughwords.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com